Very clever. I would like to see this expanded and explained a bit. It has promise.
There'll be a proper introduction to all the characters here, and its world expanded in bizarre directions.
Not bad, actually made me chuckle. My dad heard me and told me to shut up and sleep.
I expect to see more.
Then expect an actual series premiere somewhere down the line. :)
i actually kinda liked it. your art is cool and that storyline had potential. if only it was longer and went somewhere.