it got damn it WTF

I liked the animation alot but the dialoge sounds like it was thought up in ten minutes. Take a little more time thinking of lines in the future.

Hello Tvgravy!

I like your animations, you have a pretty good grasp of how voices should differ per character and the vision of scenes creating a specific emotion and impact, as well as unique humor. The animation was smooth, but there are a couple things that can be improved upon (with time of course). Just to note, I'm not a hater! I just like to be honest and provide ways in which you can improve. It looks like you created the scenes in paint, which is still fine! But in the future I would like to see you work on more sophisticated scenes creations with layers, shadows, fading, and color diffusion. I honestly am no professional in creating Flash animations, but I try my best to provide possible solutions. You may be able to use programs such as Adobe Photoshop. I know photoshop is pretty expensive, so here are a few alternatives that are free: Photoshop Express from Adobe, Pixia, or Inkscape. I'm sure there are other, do some Google searching! The last item I had was the introduction of a "Replay" button. I noticed that your animation only loop after they end. Work on an ending menu which includes a replay button, as well as a Facebook page, or even just a short "Thank You" paragraph. Anyways, thanks for your animation! I know Tvgravy can be the real gravy in the future!

Jesse-

its not bad but its not good