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Animation Critique

rated 4.03 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original

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Mar 4, 2012 | 8:57 AM EST

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Author Comments

So this was another movie made in a week, although I didn't do nearly as much work on it each day as I did for Masquerade. This one went by quickly because I got all the audio recorded on the first day, and then there wasn't a whole lot of actual animation to do for the rest of it. Also, I have like no homework. It's weird.

Anyway Sari was mad that I made the parts that she supposedly draws look too "stupid." Oops. She just wants me to write that she can actually draw better than that, just so no one's confused :P



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I like "INTELLIGENT CRITIQUE" from WPS better...

Pahgawk responds:

Well, I think you're comparing apples and oranges here... Even though that movie also has "critique" in the name, it is completely different.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

The girl forgot to take everything out before showing dave. I think that he is gonna be mad for a looooooong time.And most likely accidentally have a freak kite accident on purpose to his sister and his sister might end up in the hospital. Though very small chance. Just about as much as a chance of Sari's video being liked.

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Rated 4 / 5 stars

Quite entertaining!!

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I was really entertained by her voice, so sincere and humorous. I was really reminded of the Peanuts cartoon by her voice and antics. Very cute thing.

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

I really liked it.
The childish behavior of the little girl is very well executed in a way that is still fun to watch for older people who can appreciate her point of view, as well as the little references like Comic sans.

And your sister's voice acting is great, great attitude without been annoying, she can control her breath and most importantly, she acts natural (which is the very point of this animation).

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