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So this was another movie made in a week, although I didn't do nearly as much work on it each day as I did for Masquerade. This one went by quickly because I got all the audio recorded on the first day, and then there wasn't a whole lot of actual animation to do for the rest of it. Also, I have like no homework. It's weird.

Anyway Sari was mad that I made the parts that she supposedly draws look too "stupid." Oops. She just wants me to write that she can actually draw better than that, just so no one's confused :P

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and that's good animated movie, has story, good characters and it's funny :) that's what we want to see on newgrounds!



very good! i loved the animation and the flow of the characters in it. i also liked the expression of saves face! but there is one flaw: the voice acting of the little sis. she is like echoing and the voice is like bouncing of the walls. i think you should look at RicePirates video on voice acting and how to do it. it can really help you on your future animations and i think you have the potential to be a very good animator!



That was a very cool animation! The original concept of the whole animation was very likable. Keep up the amazing work!:)



Cute, now I'm off to watch the rest of your videos.



Can't get enough of your animation! ^^
also, there is no proof that she can draw better than that lool :P
yea and don't stop making these movies plz :>


Pahgawk responds:

no proof............. yet.
SARI: THE MOVIE! COMING TO THEATRES THIS SUMMER

yeah ok, no proof.

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Score
4.03 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 4, 2012
8:57 AM EST
Genre
Comedy - Original
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