Bridge Fight

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A Commission Flash Animation for RainbowsunLight
using Her Original 'Naruto Style" Character (Jordan)
its a commission thats why the lake of Story comprende?

i used alot of effort into this! many Frame By Frame Scenes!
i hope the hard work pay off!

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i also Thank X9001 times Caxx, Rudi999 and Twisted4000 for they Amazing Voices!!
With Lova Bocodamondo


Coming from an animation stand point this is terrible, there are many MANY things you need to drastically improve. First of all your anatomy needs some serious improving, the preportions are all over the place, I recommend going on devient art and finding some tutorials. Secondly the tweenimation makes me cringe when looking at it, the terrible walk cycle and moving symbols are just ugly. There many things that need to be improved, The voice acting wasn't terrible but it wasn't really good either. I am not trying to rag on you or anything, I am criticizing you so you can become better. I have seen your old stuff and you have improved a lot but there is still a long way to go. Also don't use gradients when coloring.

bocodamondo responds:

First: watch out befor you talk: i allready have an DA account and its 2 years old AND ACTIVE http://bocodamondo.deviantart.com

Second: there was only 3 oder 4 tweens and ENTIRE rest FBF and you guys still directly fall into those little ones??! watch my last flash "Dora vS SWIPER" wich is ONLY tweens! to know how terrible it really is and besides thers a billion populare artitst who DOING ONLY twenns.. like the creator of madness serie. and nobody complains about them if there have to much tweens

Third: ok i know you trying to critize me! and its fine i accept it. but first you have to know all infos before you ends up with a useless review wich i allready have all solutions for it

im just saiyn :C


A bit too much tweening for my tastes (gives the characters some stiff and unrealistic movements) but it was pretty good otherwise. Keep up the good work!

bocodamondo responds:

seriously? ... there was like only 3 scenes with tweens and you guys going nuts????
thers alot of populare artist who got they entire flash with only tweents but no one complains about them


it was alright, but certain parts about the animation could of been smoother. and the random orgasm the girl has before she "leaves" seemed weird

bocodamondo responds:

whats wrong with you?
is sex the only thing in your mind?

Truth be told, I liked the concept and the animation, the voice acting was ok. The only reason I didn't award 5 stars is because the names of the ninja moves were in Japanese. Knowing the name of an attack lends more power and awe to it, DBZ is a good example.

A for effort but you should look at how people walk, some of the sound is pretty tacky as well.

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3.31 / 5.00

Mar 2, 2012
3:20 PM EST