DESTROY THE BRIDGE!!?!!?!?!
BUT WHY? They could just push him from the bridge or something....
because THAT would be rubbish "DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!"
Charecters were stiff and seemed two dimensional. Voices were ok
Where is the second part?? D:
Loved it please make more :D <3
Dude, why the hell did you gave him a unhonorful death that's like the color of magic the great magician is not died by magic but only a single push from the big tower... xD
I have mixed feelings about this video.
Animation: It could have been better drawn, but its not bad. I enjoyed the battle. Though at parts the chars were kind of stiff. Especially during the jumping, and the part at the beginning with the running. I dont animate myself so my advice may be kind of worthless, but if someone is running, try making them seem inclined. You're doing a Naruto kind of battle, when they run they always incline forward. Maybe that would help a bit. Another thing that is really important is the shadowing. There was none. It would make the difference in the animation if there was shadowing to your chars. 3/5
Story/Plot: Dont get me wrong... but it was kind of cheesy. It says in the description that this is a commission, so I guess that there was a script handed to you so you could animate it. I wont hold the cheesiness against you. But one thing I will hold against you is the way you made the male mist ninja's eyes tremble. It looked like he was about to cry or get raped. If someone gets hit, they wont make that kind of face looking sad and biting their lip. They will frown and crunch their teeth, maybe wipe blood off their face indifferently. 3/5
Audio: The music went in place, but I cant help but saying that the step sounds at the beginning didnt fit. (with the girl runninfg and all). But besides that, the fire sounds and the voices went along well with the video... with the exception of when the bad guy falls into the dark abyss saying 'Aiiiiieeee!'. I really think he should have screamed 'Noooo' or something. Lol 4/5
Anyway, nice work. 3.5/5
Keep practicing and Im sure you'll get better and better.
Hope my review seemed fair.
now thats a review of my taste ^^
thanks for the critic. and i appricate everysingle detail you said :)
yeah im aware about the fact that the first running animation was terrible. i think its exactly the reason why this flash ends up with a low score. cuz if pepoles watch a flash. the first seconds are the most important ones...and mine sucked at those.
im also aware about the point. i need "runing cycle" tutorials.
the story is lousy i know ^^
i think the "aaaahh" fit more then "noo" cuz the fall was a suprise for him. and not he was counscious as the bridge explodes.
so thanks for the review. and il be practcing more ^^