it was okay. I really liked the artwork I though it was fantastic but the animation itself was very choppy. I felt like I was watching a video as it buffered every second. It is hard and tedious to draw multiple frames, and it takes forever but in the long run the extra work is far worth it.
It has potential. The voice acting was a little quiet and fuzzy but nothing wrong with it otherwise. The story was pretty cliche so I can appreciate that. The actual quality of the character and setting design was surprisingly well done, its just the animation which put me off a bit. I know it can't be easy to animate every frame with that much quality but its just something that I found slightly disappointing. It was fairly good overall and its clear this has potential so I would encourage you to continue trying to make animations and I'm sure the quality will increase over time! :D
its a little funny pretty good animation. looking forward to seeing future projects!
itÂ´s.... ok for a first
animation was not fluent but looked nice so far
but pleeease get a better mic soon!
and notch up your voice acting
The humor was a little flat in my opinion, but I thought the drawing style was really good and the narrative made sense. Work on the tiny details: 1) character voices could be cleaned up; 2) car's wheels only start rolling AFTER it stops. Good job, though.