This is nice work! The animation was not choppy and the drawings are nice. You can really tell that Greg is sad.
Some parts that need improvement is just things that need more detail, like the walk of the guy Greg spears and when the spear stabs him in the gut. In addition, the wind streams in the beginning and the sliding clouds could use some work as well.
Overall, great work! Looking forward to your future work
It is a pretty good video.
LoL it made me laugh :)
keep it up!
This is great, especially for a first animation. It looks well thought out and planned. The animation is nice, showing some real potential and it looks like you will probably make some awesome things in the future.
for a new guy this animation is great, but not perfect. you could use some more detail and a little practice. comedy is tough to get, but practice and you can get it