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Warning: audio gets loud. A short thing I put together in a few days, experimenting with voice acting & audio mixing.
Everything done by me. :T

Edit: Whaaaa!! Thank you for front page!!! <333


watched 10 times and is still fun

This was pretty funny reminds me of my good old friends the amphetamines lol which I'm assuming this was about haha because that is exactly how it goes.

woh, what just happened!?
The frame by frame work was great, I much like the part when she stretches her eyes. I don't know why but that stuck out the most. The posters on the wall were an amusing easter egg, and a nice touch to the environment.

The art was very simplistic, the lines and colors worked very smooth. Although I do enjoy seeing some shading, I don't think it was necessarily.

"A short thing I put together in a few days, experimenting with voice acting & audio mixing."

I'll bring some attention to your main focus.

The only thing I see that could use improvement is your voice. Shout voices are really hard to grasp, so it really wouldn't be fair to fixate on it. Sometimes it helps to let adrenalin flush through you, to the point where you almost feel angry when shouting. Almost convince yourself that you're taking the place of the character. At the risk of sounding corny, BE THE CHARACTER!
Aside from the shouts, the sleepy voice I felt was nailed quite well.

As far as audio mixing, it was very basic. It held a great balance and you didn't add too much, or not enough. You seem to have a firm grasp on mixing your audio.

Kudos! Over all it was very enjoyable and entertaining. Great job :)

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jaxxy responds:

I damn near lost my voice during the shouting. x_x But yes, you make a very good point - shouting lines are an art! And I don't voice act... but if I work on it I'm sure I'll get better someday. :D
Thanks a lot for the review, Poopy. :3

Nice little birdy ^^

Thank goodness you chose the red pill.

Black pill would've made you explode on any physical contact. :V

jaxxy responds:

O dear :V I am glad I made the right choice.

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4.03 / 5.00

Feb 29, 2012
1:47 PM EST
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