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How to die

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um this is what i made

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this is so awesome

This is far from good but I have seen your profile and its one of two submistions so obviusly this is just a start for you. As for content its just simple throw away jokes with simple art added to it. As I said you are just starting and you can clearly see.

If I had to give some feed back to you it would be to first work on the story or at least some better jokes. I would then add a reply button it was quite hard to review something this short with out having to open multiple tabs. Once you have worked on that I would then work on your animation/ audio.

I believe that you have taken the first steps in animating and just submitting something is a big step just the quality you have provided does not fit with NG. Just step back from submiting and work on your animation for a while.

just no man just no.

Not funny at all. No talent here either.

this was terrible, it was just stick figures that were so sensitive that if touched, explode. No originallity and was really short.

Credits & Info

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3,190
Faves:
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Votes
11
Score
3.27 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 27, 2012
6:51 PM EST