this looks good you could turn this into a movie or a game if you keep working on it
Yea, I want to make a movie, in the future :)
the grass was good but the animation was choppy and rough for a loop. if you fixed this up added music and colored and vectorized this it could be a nice portfolio piece
I actually quite like this short, looks like it could become something pretty awesome. The art style is nice and simple and animation runs smoothly once it gets going. However it seems more like a scrap piece or dump then a full submition so I can not save it for the portal.
Not bad. But I don't think Newgrounds is the place for testers. This would be more suited for Youtube don't you think?
Tnx for your opinion, and to anwser all the questions...I would have done this longer, smoother, with sound, and more complex, but with my computer this is THE BEST I can do with 480 MB RAM[And that's upgraded], I barely exported this tiny movie, that's why this in not a test that's a movie for my computer, tests are like 10 sec and not so smooth.
I think having done it on paper is cool. I kind of doubt many people do that anymore. It loops nicely. Though it would be better with sound. I'm guessing there's a chance that since the YT version has sound you might have omitted it on NG due to licensing concerns. If that's the case, I'd suggest searching for "royalty free music". There's a lot of music/sounds out there that you could use without having to pay.