Damn. Thats good frame by frame work their. Keep up your work.
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Norman was just an ordinary gerbil trying to live from paycheck to paycheck, when a day at his factory goes awry. Now, the robot has escaped, and it's time to set things right.
Animation by me.
Music by Kevin MacLeod
SwedishPlumTrees responds:
Thank you very much kind sir. Always appreciated :).
Creative! Some people dont like the fast animation like in this flash I personally Love it! Great job :)
SwedishPlumTrees responds:
Thank you very much :D.
Make it longer, and maybe make it make more sense. Either that or way less sense. Depending on if you're trying more for serious action (with the former) or hahahohohehe laughs (with the latter). Also, maybe spend a bit more time on the art? I don't know how long it took though so maybe just practice. Because you definitely have potential.
SwedishPlumTrees responds:
Fair enough. I realize that what appears on screen might not make so much sense. As for the humor/action, that's true as well. I wasn't really trying to make a totally action-y type of toon, I just wanted a good balance of both. Indeed, I should spend more time on the art as well. Thank you for the constructive criticism. Much appreciated. :)
Nice I like the smooth animation this would be amazing if it had voices but it might ruin it but anyway good work and Wazzup 5/5
SwedishPlumTrees responds:
Thank you very much. It means a lot. I should get a microphone, but I'm still a big believer that cartoons get be good, even without voices. You gave me hope. Haha.
amazing!