I really couldn't get into this Flash. Its not the worst I have seen and there is alot of room for improvement and You have potential to do better than this.
SO True. Vegeta is always like.. GRRRR I'm POWERFUL PRINCE OF SAiYENS!! Feel my Wrath!!! Then he gets turned into the bad guys b**** and goku comes to save the day.. if goku also gets turned into the b**** the gohan saves the day.. It would have been nice for Vegeta to be the bad @ss he makes himself out to be.. I actually get hyped for the chars in several shows who seem all bad @ss.. but they always freakin lose or never get near enough screen time.. I get that the author wants to leave the bad @ssness a mystery .. and therefore plausible in a lot of cases.. and i admit.. that'd probably have been better than the b**** they keep making vegeta out to be
It was okay. I think I would have enjoyed it more if your author's comments weren't so loaded with self-pity. You kind of put me in an "expect it to suck" mood so everything seemed... Y'know... Sucky. The tweening of him backflipping across the ground, the lines, definitely the voices, there were several things you could have improved upon. My biggest advice would be to try to enjoy what you do more. You don't have to brag about it if you don't want to (though honestly, from a psychological/marketing standpoint that would be best), but don't tell people to hate it in advance. If you honestly believe it sucks then one is forced to wonder why you'd show it off. Either you think the rest of us love sucky things or you just want people to tell you you're wrong and that you're actually wonderful (which, let's face it, is pathetic whether it's a flash, a dress, your weight, or anything, if you think it's bad don't expect others to disagree :P ).
All things considered, it's not a bad flash. Keep it up. You'll get better. Before you know it you'll have flashes that YOU don't think are bad.
Suck it Kakarot. LOL
It's not the best, but it isn't horrible either. I do wish you had a better mic when you made this, but the voices did need to be a big louder, especially Vegeta's scream. It was funny to me, so I gave you a 3. Next time though, it might be better to hold off on the voice work and get a better mic, or find someone who could do it for you.
yeh definitely will.. like I said, I had no intentions of this becoming popular, otherwise I definitely would have not done the voicework.. I'm no good at that. Once I move on to bigger things I'll definitely devote more time to stuff like sound. Thanks for the review=D