not bad at all keep up the work
Now this a great story.
You really have to continue this.
Just one thing, for some reason the animation tend to skip or even stop in some places. You should check into that.
This is a really good animation for a first time. I wish I had known about this ahead of time though for the voice acting. That aside, I did really enjoy the sotry thus far. You would do really well to continue this series. Your hard work will definitely pay off. Good luck on your future endeavors.
ok 1st thevideo is fing up and i dont know if it'z me or the file my laptop is good with video'z but f'z up with game'z soooo idk i like the story so far but i was blind near the end
I think this animation is great but I would just say your doing great! But add some more sound effects maybe even some music, please make the characters mouths move also add some more outline detail maybe if you can. Besides that, I would rate it 5/5!!! Please make more series love your plot! :D