It was kind of late for Valentine's Day, but this one is one of the top love storys with lesson ever made. Great job!
It was nice to find something belief-based on Newgrounds, eventhought I am not a Christian myself. However the appauling grammer and spelling within this flash was so cringe-worthy I'm afraid that it is only the novelty of a Christian video that got this anywhere. Overall, I found it incredibly disappointing and would suggest that when reading your work aloud, have friends listen to you so they may point out any awkward phrasing or grammar that you may have looked over as the writer.
thanks for the critique! :)
I will admit. I was tempted briefly to downovote it for the overarching message (as a scientist and an atheist, I find the idea that to be happy you have to let Jesus into your life vaguely offensive). Buuuut.
It's a well done flash. There's some minor typos in your subtitles, some small little things that might be tweaked here and there, but overall, it's excellently done, with good choice of music and well done symbolism. And so, despite my personal opinions, you receive 5 stars.
wow, thank you! :)
While I don't believe in God myself, I think this is a pretty nice flash. Your voice fits the overall atmosphere perfectly (though the quality of the sound could have been better) and you can't argue with the animation. I prefer to think of the Prince as a metaphore for "love" rather than Jesus, but it's fun to see such a modern version of a story that's so old.
Keep up the good work, this really made my day.
wow...i think this is the first flash, about the love of jesus, which isnt actually trolling....never expect to see something like that on newgrounds :3
keep up your great work sister and dont forget: everybody who blames you is at last thinking about jesus/god and his life ^^
haha, i was actually thinking the same thing!