Toy Theatre - "Check Up"

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The first in a series of short films, in which I use my old childhood toys as actors. This first episode delves into the mind of an elderly women suffering from insanity, possibly due to extreme dehydration. In an attempt to exact revenge, she puts together a plan that just might destroy the entire town of toys.


I dont know, it had HQ pics but it really was pretty stupid and cheap. Seems like something I would have co-ordinated as a kid playing with toys - but by no means would I ever go forth and produce a film of it. Maybe instead of just shoting still character shots you could incorporate more stope motion, create your own characters etc. The script seems to be boring and feels like you kinda wrote the first thing you thought and was like OMG i bet this is funny! Well, it's not sorry. Get people to beta your script either friends, or on the BBS, and like I said put more effort into the animation.

look i really don't like this D:< its just plan lazy..... sorry D: .......................... mabe if you try harder again and the humor was weak D:

hueychristopherson responds:

I find it interesting that you claim that I was being lazy, yet you can't bother to proof read your own one sentence review.

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2.69 / 5.00

Feb 18, 2012
7:59 PM EST
Comedy - Original