I kinda like the ideas... the animation was a little.....eh
but the ideas were pretty darn neat, you should work on your HUD (heads up display) effects a bit more, I can't really explain how to make them look better but here's some advice... Watch Iron man.

Prety cool, I think it would be cooler if you add more scenes and actualy make a storyline.

I liked the part you had, but I feel like there's not much there. The introduction for yourself and everything was a nice touch, if a bit bland. Minimalist/stick animation can work, but only really if the quality of the content is top notch. I'd say you missed the mark. Nice work, though.