I think this is well done! I really like it! I don't care what the other people say, I love this!

It wasn't bad, good at a lot of parts, but the running looked really messed up, and the ending where he punched him and grabbed the health pack (or whatever) look really wierd. Other than that, it was good :D 3.5/5

it was a sick effort. But your animation still needs alot of work dude.

felicidades por tu animacion! esta muy buena! sigue asi y mejora!

With some more time and dedication, you can get better. You have potential, and your drawing skill isn't bad, and the animation can be good at some parts. This looks like you're trying, and hopefully you'll get better soon. Practice makes perfect. I don't want to discourage you from making more work, but I would seriously suggest looking into a new microphone.