Keep up the action
There needs to be more to this with the lack of color and good animation it needs to offer more, clicking space and badly drawn characters is not enough, there is nothing to keep me interested.
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Dear Newgrounds Community,
I have recently finished my project, Astralojia: Movie 1 of 12, as a feature length, semi-animated experimental indie film. This is an older version of Astralojia I dug up, that I created 4 years ago.
It is an experiment: A format created to prove that one person can express a story visually very fast, and create it as a finished product. It doesn't go into battles, sadly, but I thought on the battle parts it might have some kind of rpg system or something...
I am also using it to promote the actual film, that you can find here:
You guys have been good to me in the past (my other account is markhansavon, but I want to restart with this one), and I thank you for that. I will keep drawing no matter what!
Regards,
Markhansavon
Needs work
I kinda liked the rough sketch style in the intro and the music was great but I got bored just pressing the spacebar. It would be nice if you could add more sounds or background music or something because, seriously, clicking/pressing the spacebar for every line of dialogue, even the pauses, pretty much had me lose interest.
It would be great if you improve it because I think this has some potential. The general background looks okay but the drawing of the characters pretty much turned me off. I was so close to dropping this right in the middle then out of nowhere background music starts playing which made me give it another chance then the music stops...I turn a few more panels then just got bored. Sorry.
