You know, referring to a piece of your own making as "whity" (I suppose you meant witty) does sound a little arrogant. I'd suggest that you don't do that in future, particularly as I didn't find it all that witty.
Now, the piece seems to be descending into a massive Nintendo / Sega fight, which is strange, given the two companies' relationships with one another these days. Mind you, the world loves a cliche and you've certainly given them that.
The combat was louder than ever and that caused a few issues, with the volume "topping out" on my speakers and half of my time was spent reaching for the volume controls, as opposed to paying attention.
I wasn't the world's most massive fan of the speech bubbles sliding in from the top of the screen - I'd have preferred a simple black bar at the base of the screen, which all characters can talk on and thus saving a little on the actual animation - give them all the same font, changing the colours for each character, as and when required.
I think that it's getting better, but I'll have to see a few more episodes, to be totally sure.
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