I just wanted to share a comic I worked on a few years back. I would just like to know what folks think of the comic. I've been playing with the idea of turning it into an actual 3d animated series. Please tell me what you think of the art and story. I'll play around with spicing up an action comic later.
ok a good start
One question: why is there a lens flare where there is no noticeable lens to cause it? Or are we looking through a camera? Because that's the only way you'll see one.
As for the rest, the pacing could use a little work...a little more clarity on the characters. Maybe background? Why was he there...and so on. Also the panel angles seemed a little strange. Abrupt changes.
Pretty good.
I don't like the bars surrounding it or the fact it somehow ended in the middle, you should check by yourself that it doesn't work properly.
its original
Needs Little work, little rough around the edges, but still pretty impressive.