the story was great the sound and narration could use a little work but the animation was solid i hope to see more of your work in the future
For someone who doesn't consider themselves an animator or a voice actor this was very well done. It felt a lot like a prequel to a longer story, so I'm hoping there's more later on. Keep up the good work!
you got me super interested!
this is the great start/pitch/trailer. I really like the setup. the narrator (though had bad audio quality) didn't over or under do the delivery. It was paced well and fed the information very well. It didn't hang on any beat too long. And with everything this covered, how much you explained and how much you left a mystery really got my brain cogs turning and wondering where it could go, or what came of all this. Very good job!
From a visual standpoint it was a very unique style. reminds me a bit of edward gory and A series of unfortunate events a bit (that's a good thing). But the paper cutout look, while it seems like it might be too distracting or glaring of a style statement... it didn't. It wasn't distracting and over all gave a nice tone to the movie. You handeled all these things brilliantly. Congrats!
Now that was quite the dark story.
The only downside is that the truth was never revealed in the end.
it's a great plot, especially with the rumors and stuff. it makes you wonder. and i love your style of art and the animation was smooth. you were talking about how awful the sound was, but i think that it's fitting. it really nails that creepy feeling. 10/10, 5/5.