... i wish i was smart enough to know what happened-- but
this was great-- and i wish i could animate as great as this!
i love the detail- and the style of your art!
the story- to me-- just.. makes me want to know more- a cliffhanger? not really.. but still-- it's one of those stories that'd make some one that's interest want to follow you through and through-- i guess i'm a loyal fan now x]!
this will be an interesting series
yes yes indeed
Great job for a first attempt.
I hope to see more of your work some day. Thank you for sharing, and if it turns out this isn't for you, follow your dreams =).
YOU MUST MAKE THE ANIMATION
My soul will not rest untill I know what happened!
This story sounds lot like a fairy tale or myth, more mystery than facts. Shadows and sudden images suggests sins. Maybe there no general son involved, or demons. Just insanity of one sister pulling a knife on another. The monster reaching for the sister at the end may not symbolize revenge. The monster may only be angry. I hope this story continues, if not it remains a tale where darkness, or innocence, could have been anywhere.
Aside from my examinations, I will nick pick at one gross detail. Bones are actually beige, or a tan color. It's a process in labs that makes them white.
Are teeth suppose to be white....maybe I'll google that. :p