Next time submit a finished game, and not just a test. That will increase your score next time.

yeah,that's a start

you say it's a test? well,not bad then... now, go on and include all the needed. BTW,there are some misplaced items and some invisible walls... but as you said,it's a test.
Be sure to update this regularly. I'd be happy of seeing this improved and listening to whatever audio you include.

Still... don't make posting demos and test an habit in New Grounds. I understand why you made it though... NOBODY DAMN CHECKS DUMPING GROUNDS! XD
Oh,and if somebody ever attacks you in the comments saying bullshit don't care, but if somebody EVER goes mad at you saying "Don't post demos never here!" or "Fucking shit this is spam"... you are allowed to troll them. Why? because they take too seriously this :P

---jabalias_out---

PS:please notice me if you ever update it

Could have potential

Looks like the makings of a decent game. But a list of controls would be great. Needs some more features and goals. I dunno if its just me, but once I tried walking into the third area, my guy was lost and could not return. If you do any more with this game, let me know. I would love to try it again!