I don't need to be a game designer to know this is terrible. You need to take pride in your work. Actually spell things out and use proper english. Also there's a million songs on Newgrounds people will let you use. instead you looped the entire thing with a back and forth scale sound. Where's the plot and where's the issue? The whole thing is a resolve.
You might noted that English is not my first language. I speak French. The song is not that bad because BobyB64 made a remix of it. Also the song is the part of the series.
It's an essay
The art is nothing noteworthy but tolerable. However the dreadful music, combined with the extremely dull story makes this a rather intolerable flash. If there was no music, it would have just been plain boring.
Please do not ever use that music again. Unless you want to aggravate someone. Then it's suitable.
Bad news. The song is the part of the series. It means I'll use it over and over. If you don't like it, don't watch Isabella's vlog episodes.