HEY STOP USING MY NAME!
lol... Just kidding! ------> Not that serious look guy :P
Ok... First of all, I would like to say that I saw all you "Genius Cop" series and I must say I really found some changes in the two versions not much though.
Feedback about your flashes in general:
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I see that you have an ambition on creating a series using flash. You know what is good about this program you can give it more nice effect if you just given it a bit, little, tiny more D.E.T.A.I.L (Delete and Eliminate Tommy Are Isolated Loser) Sorry about that I mean detail hopefully I didn't damage the idea. An example of detail is to give the characters some cartoony nose; I don't really know what kind of nose will fit your characters so you need to find out by yourself. You can do many things in flash. There is a whole world inside this small software. Use it, give it some effect and give it a life.
I just feel that it's a bit dull. I don't know maybe the problem wasn't with the animation anymore it's in the idea, the joke. Your joke needs to come in surprise and unexpected for example.
Feedback about your 2nd episode of Genius Cop:
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About the voice of that cop in my opinion, I really thought that "RicePirate" really don't fit that cop because his voice fit for "Solid Snake" and "Tory". I think your voice was fit for that cop.
About your mistake in drawing that hand, it reminded me of my thumb mistake. I kept on making mistakes until my art teacher told me to keep looking at my fingers in the mirror while I draw them because when I look at my hands from my side I see it pointing in a different direction from what other people look at it.
Feedback about your 1st episode of Genius Cop is version:
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I didn't know there is a hidden seen in the two video until my mouse stepped on it which also mean that I didn't read "Author Comments" although I heard it from you because I don't really like to read long comments but love writing a long one :P.
some questions and advices:
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I just wanted to ask you some notes about: what is your style in drawing? I know that you are going to say:" I Don't understand this ?.?" or maybe you will not even to going reply this. But, if you did replay on this, tell do you have your own methodology of drawing (commonly used), use similar to a known cartoon such as (Anime, Disney, South Park, etc). It's just curiosity.
You're really planed for everything (the timing, the music, the logo, etc) didn't you?
You know the word that they always say to beginner artist "practice, practice, practice". If you really want some tips about drawing, animating, which thing to choice you can ask me.... Unless this question was hard for me to answer ^_^!
Can you create a nice logo for my account? Because when I saw your sketch it was nice. Please send me your creation.
I hope my comment was helpful feedback and sorry about the long feedback.
"I like to telling a live story here. hehe :P"