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Every Gears of war game

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So this is pretty much my first ever flash. Ever. So go easy I am 100% new to all of this.

This sums up every gears of war game for me nicely.

Don't hate I love the Gears of war franchise.

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lol

hehe... The simple fact that your purpose for this video is just for a test of humor, tells me that you are very clever.. I'm not sure if anyone else thought of that, but dude that is a very smart idea.. I thought the act was acceptible, it made me chuckle.. However I thought the only "con" was that the joke was a slight bit too simple and common/familiar. Goodluck to you. I'd love to see a full video of this =).

Nickerrous responds:

Thanks mate, only just seen this i completely forgot i uploaded this! I am thinking about getting into animating again i just need to brainstorm :)

Well, I agree!

This is a good start for a first flash. Its short and clever, if lacking in the animation department. I defiantly see some potential in you, and I have some advice if you want o improve your videos.
1) Always plan well what you are going to make. It's a basic but often overlooked step.
2) Never release anything under your quality standards. Consider bad videos practice.
3) Always have an idea guiding the video. It doesn't need to be anything like 'save africa', it can be something simple like 'XYZ is dumb' or 'I'm going to make a satire of XYZ'. You did a good job of of this when making this video. I'm assuming your idea was: 'Every GoW character looks like giant muscly freak and dies' (Never actually played the game though.)

--PROS--
*Good voice acting and Sound Quality is average
*Excellent ideas for character design, but animation is lacking
*Good use of shock humor

--CONS--
*Bad animation quality
*No plot
*Don't usually take off for the brevity of videos but this was too short.

Nickerrous responds:

Thanks man, i just bought a drawing tablet so i am working on it!

Short

Might as well just draw a picture instead.

First time flash? Not to shabby.

Pretty impressive for a first time flash.
It was neither stick men fighting or just pasted in pictures.

The drawings in the load screen were nice, it will be good to see them in future flashes.
As for the flash itself, I personally didn't find it amusing but thats just me.

Clearly you used ONEYNGs lessons on flash, it was very alike his.

Overall I'm gonna give you a 6/10 which is pretty high for a first flash, and I'm gonna vote a 4 to bump the score up a bit.

Good luck in the future.

Nickerrous responds:

Hey thanks, and yes, I gave his lip syncing tutorial a look!

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Jan 19, 2012
8:16 AM EST