it's really boring to see this
Author Comments
Hey Guys, This is my first flash film, I make short clips but this is my longest, Its still short but you get it.. E mail me!!
Cute
~~REVIEW~~
A cute animation you have here, and yes it is short, notbad for your first though as it shows promise, anyways nice effort
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it longer and add content
~~OVERALL~~
A cute but decent try
~X~
it shouldnt have such a bad score
animation is pretty good,it should be in the 2.00s not no 0.74
Promising...
.. start - given a bit of time and more advanced skills i reckon you could pump out something good.
Neat graphics.
The plot is uninteresting, but I liked the art style and animation. It could make an interesting sequel with greater length and a plot.