Not bad
If it were more fluid it would definately be better! The story is good though and perhaps if you had more frames and made the movement slightly more detailed it would make it more fluid.
Author Comments
this is a remake from one i made years ago. after learning more with flash i was able to make a better movie.
Frankly...
... you could use some improvement. It was good for what it was, I'm not bashing you or nothing. Just keep trying, experimenting and most importantly, watch other animations and take note of the small little details that makes the movements more fluid, or even take not of real life physics and how you could take those into account when you're putting stuff like this together. Knowledge and patience are big essentials in animating.
Keep the good stuff coming.
myrulz6969 responds:
Thank you, i am glad to hear stuff like to help me become better at flash movies.