Not enough
I see that you understand how to write a joke but yet you didn't quite do it right. You need more set up. Like you show this guy, or clock face, writing document and preparing suff, having a business meeting shaking hands with with the other guy. He gets to the plane, show a map of the plane going to canada and then...... Now what?...... You see you need to build the expectations high and high and high and slam them to the grounds.......to newgrounds... sponsor :P