Another Drama Flash? Let's have a look!
I like the monochromatic theme, and how there was nothing but music playing, it really allowed the story to push forward with what you had. Although I did get confused at some parts, and you did seem to get lazy during some scenes. It worked great though.
What I think you did wrong with this flash, was show the girls face at the end. You should have at least built a larger climax up to it, only to end the film in black and not have it be shown. I'm assuming this is his happy ending...
Not all stories need that! In fact, not alot of them should! I think people need to realize that not everything is sunshine and rainbows.
9/10 for idea.
8/10 for animation.
7/10 for execution.
Well, when I was making the storyboards for this, I considered giving it a sad ending. However, I asked myself why I was making the video, and the answer I came up with told me that I was trying to make a statement about how I perceive life. The thing is, though, I'm a happy person. I guess I just thought that I should at least mention that there are reasons to continue living. All is not bad. I'm not sure why people said this review was "useless", because it's a valid point. In fact, it may make more sense than my reasoning. However, it just comes down to what the purpose of the movie should be, essentially, and a sad ending wouldn't fit my vision.
the whole thing was done in a simple manner, something i can appreciate. you managed to express what you observed and felt without going too deep into anything at all.
i like to opine on how i feel newgrounders can improve on their submissions but i think you did a pretty good job, so there's not much for me to say =)
everybody wears a mask to hide their true selves. disgusting. the animation was freaking awesome however.
So the kids a rebel?
It's not exactly correct. See it is true that everyone wears a mask but the video implies that this is somehow a bad thing. Humans are social creatures and our lives are better off by joining a collective then everyone being an individual.
There is nothing stopping the mother, teacher, or bus driver from understanding the kid, they just don't care. Why should they? It's not like the kid can do math. Love is not unconditional. At least the kid had the mask but now he has to see the world without its comfort. He will have to abandon his humanity along with the rest of the behavioral rules that previously made his life easy and mindless. However, he hasn't just dropped the burden of social rules entirely either. He just has to make new ones. He hasn't escaped judgment either since he still has to live in a world run by a collective.
Leaving us with the girl taking off her mask completely misrepresents the decision he just made. The idea is that he can now be honest with someone that will be honest with him. However, he fails to realize that unless one of them puts on a mask their relationship will not go far. The best he can hope for is that she is the one who puts on a mask before him.
So am I saying that nobody should be a courageous individual and everyone is better off in the collective? No. I'm saying that if you call yourself and individual you have to realize that you are just a one man collective. Your philosophy on life is just as valid is that of every person in the collective. You haven't taken off a mask, you've just chosen a different mask to wear.
I agree with the majority of the things you've said here. This sort of reminds me of some of the reasons people dislike the book The Catcher in the Rye: people just see the protagonist as a whiny, sulky, immature kid who can't just accept his situation and make the best of it. I think the same thing could apply here. You can't ever escape the system we are all in, so there isn't much point in being depressed about it. Right around here, however, I think my agreement stops.
Firstly, I thought I should mention that I didn't intend to make it look like the kid CAN'T do math. I just wanted to show that he would rather be drawing. He doesn't want an "easy and mindless" life, but instead prefers to have one with meaning. The fact that he was punished for not following instructions is completely normal, and I don't want to make it look like it was a bad thing, because it's not. Conformity is, to a certain extent, a good thing. The part that I wanted to portray negatively was the manner in which he was punished. The kid was labelled as "stupid," he was publicly humiliated, and he was placed in a vulnerable position against the "smart" kids. I have seen multiple times kids being mistakenly labelled as "stupid" just because they didn't apply themselves or because they were not strong in a certain subject. They are then targeted for bullying by other kids because they have already been defined as a loser. The truth is, however, that none of this should really matter when you're a kid. Sure, this sort of system is fine when you're older and more responsible and at the age when you needs to work well to take care of yourself, but by that point, you probably already have some sort of sense of direction as to where you want to go. When you're a kid, the world should still be your sandbox. You should be allowed to explore whatever interests you while your options are still open. The direction imposed forcefully that I am depicting in this video limits this.
As for the scene at the end, I think you have made a key assumption that is wrong: "unless one of them puts on a mask their relationship will not go far." I disagree with this entirely. I think that there is a bit of truth in this, but it just comes down to what you are going to call a "mask." For example, being polite could, potentially, be considered a mask, and I agree that that is a mask that needs to be worn in order to have a working relationship with anyone. The video isn't about masks like that, though. The masks in the video disguise your feelings and lie about how you actually feel. They represent everything about your public self that isn't part of your actual self. They define how other people see you. I think that if you need to put on a persona that isn't entirely truthful in order to remain friends with someone, then they aren't REALLY your friend. You should be able to be yourself around them and be accepted for who you are. That is all I am trying to say with that last scene.
A mere copy of...
Another Brick In The Wall, nothing new, nothing interesting... Proof enough that all you need to do to get a good score is to sympathize with a niche of emos.
Well, when I was making this, I figured I would rather make something that had some meaning for myself rather than cater to, for example, a niche of gamers who like unoriginal video game jokes. Of course, it's true that my movie isn't completely original either. The concept is similar to many other movies and music out there, but I believe that is because the themes are still just as relevant today as they were back in 1979 when Another Brick in the Wall was released. Either way, I still think that Newgrounds is a very diverse neighbourhood, and although each movie won't appeal to everyone, they all have a place somewhere. I'm sorry you weren't able to relate.