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This is actually pretty old, considering I made it 3 months ago, just never got around to uploading the damn thing lol anyway, I HAD TO SPLIT IT UP into 2 pieces because Newgrounds wouldn't let me post something that's 1mb over the limit so I'll upload the second part also.

Here's the link to the second part:
http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/586724

Here's the link to the full version:
http://www.newgrounds.com /dump/item/a3214bd6921889 e2ce10f8e47c95214f

But remember to come back and rate and comment HERE.

Anyway critique and comment, and most importantly, ENJOY :3


This is so cool :D

awesome, just AWESOME

This is quite good.

Let's see.. Where to begin?

Ah! I know!

This flash exhibits a high level of quality. The sprite work is skillfully done and animation is exceptionally smooth, and the special effects that you added give a nice amount of polish. Overall, I'd be willing to say that your work ranks up there with the likes of R1665. "Why R1665?" you ask. Well, because his sprite work also exhibits high high-level awesomeness, and neither of you copy Alvin Earthworm-- which is a rather refreshing change of pace, to say the least.

However, as I'm sure you noticed almost immediately, I did not give you a perfect score. The reason for that is because

1) There is ALWAYS room for improvement and I would like to see you consistently top your own work with each new flash.
2) During the fight, the screen started flipping out, and I found that just a tad disorienting.

Final Verdict:
Crazy camera: -1

Seek perfection: -1
Final score: 8/10

First Review!!!!!!

Pretty good movie. The quality of the animation was good, and I think you did a pretty good job. I´m gonna check the second part, anyway.

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3.28 / 5.00

Dec 26, 2011
5:51 PM EST