+Pretty good, fluent animation
-Poor audio quality
It was very short. Animation was a nice style and it was kinda fluent, but the overall quality... it's hard to say, the whole thing seemed like it was "unclear", especially with the audio. I would give it like a 5.5/10.
Wow! A Newgrounds animator who can actually draw, and an animation with no fighting, no game or pop-culture references, and no pandering to insider crews! What a concept!
It's kinda thin on story, but that's the only criticism I have and I'm giving it a 10 anyway.. It's still cute and charming, and what it DOESN'T have is just as impressive as what it does: originality. If you work on more complex scripts, I think you'll really have something here. Nice work!