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I Couldn't understand any word they said. The animation looks good, you could also add more poses if you wanted. The style reminds me to Bill Plympton cartoons.
Author Comments
The title states it all!
Updated the audio.. thanks you critics and I aim to make this better.
Stay tuned for the others similar to this.
Neochilds responds:
Hey Bill was a great comic artist and animator, I 'll get there soon enough, he does have a head start though. Thanks for your host comment.
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I like the animation, but could barely understand what was said
Neochilds responds:
Hmm no worries, I know what I need to tweak now thanks.
Excellent Animation
Very funny!!! excellent animation!!!
Neochilds responds:
Thanks hmm where is the criticism. It's not Newgrounds without the criticism. Just part of the nature and that is why it is great to post here.
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nice style and animation, but i couldnt understand a word. you should just try to keep this a silent movie with effects and make the animations more clear, or get someone to voice act. otherwise good job :)
Neochilds responds:
@waterflame thanks for the criticism I will work on that.