Hmmm
Should I review this? I like to give the SS some attention, but its another half-baked thing and it seems mean to give low scores to my friends.
OK, so you know what the problems were and I am sorry your mike is broken, however, not all sounds need a mike, and neither does Speakonia etc.
the story was OK, if rather basic, and the art was reasonable. I look forward to the next real quality SS submission I can really support.
Best Wishes for Xmas and the New Year