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This is my first full flash I've made. Its to a song that I made as well lol. Enjoy

Peas

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I liked it.

Creepy song, but it goes along with the animation well.
Really good for your first animation. Keep up the good work.
4/5
8/10

Emdee-NF responds:

Thanks dude, Im trying! lol

Promising...

For a first flash, this isn't all that bad. The background music was good, but it could have done with a bit more sound. As for the animation, well, there is plenty of room for improvement. I liked the blur in the opening, but the ending blur was too long. Additionally, this shouldn't loop automatically, I would recommend adding a play button to future submissions.

Emdee-NF responds:

Thanks man I'm happy this made the site lol. And def right about the play button, the loop is annoying ha.

Ok...

It's awesome for your first try. Now you should work on voices and after that try making flashes with stories and shiz.

Emdee-NF responds:

Thanks for the input man!

not bad :)

I actually enjoyed that, it was a strange eerie short. Could use a play button though, but otherwise not bad :)

Emdee-NF responds:

Thanks dude, I like the vibe as well