I liked it.

Creepy song, but it goes along with the animation well.
Really good for your first animation. Keep up the good work.
4/5
8/10

Promising...

For a first flash, this isn't all that bad. The background music was good, but it could have done with a bit more sound. As for the animation, well, there is plenty of room for improvement. I liked the blur in the opening, but the ending blur was too long. Additionally, this shouldn't loop automatically, I would recommend adding a play button to future submissions.

Ok...

It's awesome for your first try. Now you should work on voices and after that try making flashes with stories and shiz.

not bad :)

I actually enjoyed that, it was a strange eerie short. Could use a play button though, but otherwise not bad :)