I thought this was pretty decent, though there were a few things I felt were off.
The voice acting was very good, like believable and clear to hear. Only once or twice did it sound a bit off.
The animation was nice, and I can see a lot of effort was put into it so I feel like a douchebag when I say at some points the bodies seemed a little stiff and robotic.
The plot is awesome and I'm looking forward to seeing the next episode.
The overall feel of the flash was that it moved a little slowly and at certain points did the camera angle feel wrong, or that some expressions seemed mistimed.
Other than that, t''was awesome. Looking forward to more.
Story wise, however, I think you introduced too many characters in one episode. It would've been better if you could stagger it out.
Pretty good, but
You are throwing a lot of characters and information at the audience for a first episode. If you added fight scenes you could theoretically stretched this first episode out to 2 or 3 episodes.
But overall, it's very good. I like the dialogue and the artwork doesn't bother me as much as it seems to bother other people.
Looking forward to seeing the next episode.
hm well it's
kind of Cerebral , vol. 2 will be more better ; good job with the characters
Hmm, good, but...
Do not make the caracters talk about what we can see, so boring to hear a totally hollow speech...Udge fail at the beginin, making the information scene, cool looking but so useless, anyway there's way to put the background story while showing the characters in action. [even in anime they do it]
And archetype japanese characters are not all just hollow stereotypes. I found your work interesting, with quite potential. I think, If you got more than evil and good characters, it could be far more sucess, and you already got one, the blue knight girl, who's on the good side but kill without pity.
I will keep an eye on your work, keep going.