Great Base, But Some Minor and Major Issues
I mean, all of the countless cliche anime characters and moments aside, it's art wasn't the greatest. Animation was pretty choppy and not so great either, however the action scenes were very well-done. Voice-acting was very good, along with the dialogue and overall script.
Unlike TOME, this seems like it's definitely going to actually go somewhere, and I'm looking forward to the next episode.
notbad at all
so this was one huge file not a big issue there was alot you put up forward, i would slowly push things and characters, some art detail could also be focused on, it was abig production almost seemed as if you were rushing it, now as i get into this it was right away funny especially with the first scene and that lil "VERY" cute indeed, great intro too, infact i find the "HUMOR" the best part so thats a plus, the characters are good but a tad more deatils here and there wouldnt hurt.so all and all this was a good pice, great voices decent visuals and funny story parts. untill next time keep up the decent flashworks.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above some art details here and there could be mentioned, the charcters could use abit of that, just more overall detail in that area and such,
fun movie with a medal always a plus, good graphics, decent voices i enjoyed it.
thank you very much! The whole cuteness is important to me - - i know alot of people think its dumb or kiddy but i think it adds an element of fun
Great. Has great Potential
It has potential. And the idea is good. Animation and voices were very good. no lagging so thats another plus. only issue i saw was poor designs on the characters. you would have arms off balance and such. but as it goes, im sure it will get better.
Potential yet untapped
Let not the fools who see only it's graphics lead you astray. For though it lacketh in the dazzle and charm of a masterpiece, a diamond in the rough is found in it's stories and even in it's character. The soundtrack sounded very fitting, neither over-bearing nor unnoticable, but it could use touch-ups in lip syching and fluidity of motions. Although i have little room to critisize since i havent even opened a animator engine, i created this account so that icould ease your mind away from those who only see short term and can't comprehend growth in story and animator like i can. Keep going strong and keep this story alive in your mind.
(On a side note, is it bad that i knew exactly who Omahdon was? XP)
The animation entertained me the whole way. Great viewpoints and quality. Overall is a very neat piece of work. Kudos!