The children will enjoy this.
It seemed like an anime that had the usual suspects and seemed to have the generic plot that is reworked all over the East. I was laughing at this fact to take any of what the characters really said seriously. Also on the negative side an improvement to the art - Practice drawing moving limbs and hands. I noticed the strain in quality.
The laughable cliches aside. The art in this video is done very nicely especially everything besides the characters. Also most of it was pretty smooth except the prementioned limbs. All the sounds were clear and had no trouble listening to this on a lower decible.
Lastly the writing seemed predictable which is okay for now until it opens up. Though I felt like you tried to introduce far to much in one episode instead of showing us the mains and building the relationship.
nothing awfully original about the plot or the characters...
and the animation overall could really use some work...
well.. only time will tell if this project can really take off, do your homework man and try to improve the characters drawing (the only major issue) and im sure it will get a lot better overall.
You've got great imagination AND voice actors. If I could give a tip, it would be to work on the anatomy, but practice is the cure, and I'd like to see many more volumes!
hm well it's
kind of Cerebral , vol. 2 will be more better ; good job with the characters
Great work!!! It is going to be an awesome series! Keep it up!