First of all, don't be discouraged by negative feedback. If you continue being ambitious with this show you can only grow.
It's a bit of a shame that you had so much stuff explained and so many characters introduced in the first episode. You seem to have a pretty well-developed story in your head and maybe it would've been better to feed it to the audience step by step, like focusing on one or two characters in the first episode. It would be much more interesting if you explained the world over the course of a few episodes instead of basically saying "There is this and that, and there are some people there there and there."
I won't mention anything about character archtypes because characters can develop while the story progresses.
With that being said, I'm waiting for more.
Where's Vol. 2? >:o
Hmm, I'm kind of surprised why people compare this to other animes...
I can't see any similarities at all... Neither art, music or characters resemble anything I've seen so far in animes, but maybe I'm wrong.
Your style is very unique. Especially the color choices you make. Really bright and flashy.
Do I need to say anything about the voice actors? I guess it all speaks for itself. Great cast, great voices. Hope they keep this up.
Still, one thing I could complain about would be the storytelling. Not everything, but little parts of it. For example, when you introduced the bad guy without that typical "I'm the big bad baows that has a big penis and so on" atmosphere.
Still, I can't wait to see how the whole story develops.
9/10, to leave space for improvements. Well done. :)
gread but not best :(
you only get 7/10 kus i wanted to see som kind of fight in this ep
your not best and its not so good vois acting i would like to see som more action n the later eps
ether way NICE JOB :D
Potential yet untapped
Let not the fools who see only it's graphics lead you astray. For though it lacketh in the dazzle and charm of a masterpiece, a diamond in the rough is found in it's stories and even in it's character. The soundtrack sounded very fitting, neither over-bearing nor unnoticable, but it could use touch-ups in lip syching and fluidity of motions. Although i have little room to critisize since i havent even opened a animator engine, i created this account so that icould ease your mind away from those who only see short term and can't comprehend growth in story and animator like i can. Keep going strong and keep this story alive in your mind.
(On a side note, is it bad that i knew exactly who Omahdon was? XP)
Loves it but...
The one thing I can see that should be fixed is hand size. If their hand cover their face its too small. If it touches their ears its too big.