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This is the one wich I was tlaking about.
Alles klar.
So look wich is my request:I'm just asking you to tell me what you think
about my introduction,wich will be a 50 minute movie,next year,around april.
I don't care if it is reject or not,I just whant to find out(I am having bugs,
and sometime the images are mixing).

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With so much build up, UnterGrund should be a solid 10-30 minute video..

Very cool!

This was a great into for a movie. The snake at the beginning dasappears way too early. Try to fix that. Otherwise, it did its jod. Well done!

Well.../Nun...

There is not much to vote. The font looks good but your German sucks...
Is German your native language or is this an experiment?
I cannot tell anything about the story because I don't undertsand the text. Try again with more text and you should get more positive votes.
If you need help with language, you can ask me.

Da gibt es nicht viel zu bewerten. Die Schriftart sieht ganz okay aus, aber dein Deutsch ist miserabel. Ist Deutsch deine Muttersprache oder ist das ein Experiment? Ich kann gar nichts über die Story sagen, weil ich nicht den Text verstehe. Vesuche es noch einmal mit mehr Text und du solltest mehr positive Bewertungen kriegen. Wenn du Hilfe mit der Sprache brauchst, dann kannst du mich fragen.

descom responds:

Nun, Sie sehen, Deutsch ist nur meine bevorzugte Sprache, die nicht heimisch. Ich bin mehrsprachig, nicht eine gute Tat.
Was die Geschichte, ich versichere Ihnen, es wäre etwas, das viele nicht erwarten zu sehen sein.

Hmmm not bad

I can see you were trying to set up the intro as being an epic cinematic intro but just as a viewer, I found it kinda dragged on. It wasn't the music, it was the fact there were moments of nothing on the screen. Perhaps making the fade to blacks faster or having something in the background to keep my interest. Just something I thought I would mention, don't take it too harshly. Good luck on your movie!

Feedback

To be honest, I'm a bit baffled that you are working out the opening credits of your movie, as they're probably one of the least important things to start with. Anyway, I'll give you some feedback to work on this, as that's obviously why you submitted this.

The black gaps with nothing in them are way too long. I kept wondering if the video was glitching. It's not dramatic, it's just a tad annoying. The fonts are nothing special, and the music is generic. You might want to add some sort of texture instead of just a boring black screen. Also a more logo-like name for the movie would be better and add some appeal. But the main thing, yeah, you really need to make this shorter, as your viewer will lose interest very quickly. Hope that helps.

descom responds:

Danke schön.
Yes it was helpfull.

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Score
3.33 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 27, 2011
12:08 PM EST