I liked it!
I don't know if I'm saying this because I am a total cat person or because I hope to get skyrim real soon, but the "meow?" just made my day! But I do agree with WolfBlade333, she should have threw a spoon or said "BAD KITTY!!!!!".
Also, that black Khaijiit reminded me of my cat, who looks like he's on steroids. And so, he looks just like the Khaijiit but without the thief gear.
i hate it when im breaking into a person's house and THEY ARE RIGHT THERE!! (especially when it's 12:00 at night!! i mean they should be sleeping..)
THIS IS WHY I CAN'T BE A VAMPIRE! D:
but you should've made it longer i mean you could put SOOO much stuff in it! XD
but all in all nice work.
Good, but i know a better like to add on to that.
Instead of the lady screaming at the end what you should have done was have the lady simply say "BAD KITTY!" then have her throw the spoon or something XD
That was so akward for like ten seconds but what the khajiit should of said was i'm the thane of whiterun. still that is hilarious
lol i never get caught!