What was that?
Make it longer!!!
Author Comments
This this is my first animation using Flash. I did this for my school project, however the Audio lessons is just starting so I have not added any sound effects or background music. Please I want feedback to better myself!
Thanks!
TwoDogsEffin responds:
Actually I wasnt allowed to make a long flash, this was just to show that I know how to do the basics. But I agree, longer is better lol
Ehh.
You could use VAST improvement...Like putting the faces on the Heads/bodys but other then that its okay.
TwoDogsEffin responds:
Thanks for the critique, however I was going for that style of animation, kinda like Rayman how the limbs never connected. The teacher said the same thing but didnt dock me any marks
Nice looking and a good first!
Its great looking and a great experiment!
TwoDogsEffin responds:
Thank you!