Its pretty good
The fight was pretty good and the close-up faces were good too but can you change the music to something with more action? that's all I ask for. Fight 5/10 Music 3/10
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Hi, Newgrounds!
Finally, I submitted something. I always loved this site, so I thought i'd give something back! It's my first flash animation, as I got Flash just a few days ago, so im still a complete noob with this. xP
Good for a first.
This being your first flash, it is still better than most things I have seen here.
10/10
Not bad for a first
I'm going pretty easy on you, considering it's your first sub, but this actually isn't too bad. It's obviously a practice film, and it looks like you got some good practice in. I liked a few of the animations, particularly the smoke when the one guy was sliding on top the other. You took me (pleasantly) by surprise when you did the close-ups of the two men - you draw quite well! I'd like to see you use that close-up style and perhaps come up with a plot, or a more elaborate fight or something. You've got potential.
CroudControl responds:
Thank you very much for taking your time to write a review, you're absolutely right. This stickmen thing was more of a practise for me, and it helped me alot to quickly understand how flash works. For future projects, I'm planning to draw only real characters.
A good first step on the long road of animation.
Stick fights are common, but since this is your first flash, I'm impressed that you were able to do something like this. Most first timers are usually, well...not as great.
It's obvious that you've learned a thing or two from watching other flash animations, and I hope you continue to improve.
CroudControl responds:
Thanks. Yes, it's true. I've watched other flash anims, but I also started learning how to draw mangas half a year ago, and that's where I got most of my starting skills from :D
At last! :D
Why can't all "first flashes" be like this?
Thank you!
I hate it when people submit a first flash, and it's crap. I always said I don't expect them to be perfect, but at least have them be finished, good, interesting, and of decent length. You did all of that with this one.
This is THE example of what a first flash submission should be like.
CroudControl responds:
Thank you, man!