Looks like you really did put some effort into this, unlike most portal submissions. Normally I blam trailers/previews/tests to oblivion, but this is an exception. I'll keep my eye out for Chapter 1. When do you think it'll be ready?
:) hehe, thanks, well, i'm working like crazy so i can release the first chapter by middle december, that is the goal.
Didn't pull me in.
I have no doubt that the final project could be something awesome, but this trailer did nothing but show that there's going to be planes and a guy. That's it. Nothing on the story except war. Nothing on the characters except that the main guy has a back, and possibly a helmet. Next time, if you're going to bother to make a trailer (which I think is pointless unless the project is HUGE, I'm talking a 20-minute short film or you have multiple episodes of this series completed to a passable cutoff point in the plot), make sure to give us a taste of what you want people to be impressed by in the final product. If it's the characters, show us what's interesting about the characters, if it's the action, show us some of the action, if it's the drama, give us a taste of that. But planes are not interesting by themselves, neither are guys with helmets. The vagueness of this trailer lets me know that you haven't done much with the final product itself. I haven't lost faith in this project though, I'm sure it'll be good, but this trailer wasn't what told me that.
yup, you're right, i have about 50% of the work done already, it's not completed yet :b, I guess I just wanted to show some of the stuff, to make something to raise the morale and create expectation.
I think I messed up with the word "trailer", now that I see that is more like a teaser hehehe, however i appreciate your review and you can rest assured that the final product will be awesome :)