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Banned Toy Commercial

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lol

Well this was funny and gave me a laugh or two, it was just very very "SHORT" and it loops over and over there are a few ways to add to this and fix it. it was a good little clip though. infact that reminds me since it is kind of short you can add other "SHORT" clips along with this one to make it a submission with lots of short animations and that alone will ad some good qaulity to this entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The one thing about this was that it was too short and could either use a longer depth to it or could use other short animations with it, just something to think about when putting more quality to a short flash. Stop action code was really needed with this one, it loops over and over and with a simple stop action code, it could stop that and its fairly easy to put in only takes up one key frame, there are lots of tutorials on the site on how to do this if you dont know, anyways think about adding a stop action code.

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good try

your audio recording could be better, yet it has great animation. you got a good sense of humor.

Could of been longer

This was a nice flash, but it could of been longer. Look forward to seeing more of your work.

what product is it?

cool

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3.95 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 17, 2011
1:02 PM EST