The animation was pretty good. The only thing I think would have made the wizard's death better is if he grabbed his chest, like if he was having a heart attack or something. Either way, this mini-movie made me laugh. :D
Thanks for the comment, and actually, that's EXACTLY what I wanted to happen!! But my friend said it would be funnier of he just died... lol... oh well.
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That comment made me laugh so hard, I'm glad you liked it, lol.
what cheese would you like, ched or moz?
it was funny in a really cheesey way, i believe that's the intention (growing a beard at mach 8 much?) the animations were smooth and well done, the plot... ok it's ment too be a comedy so of course everything is over the top, and the voice acting, know what, was pretty damn good for a first go
now for things that can be improved, the music really over shadowed the voices, when it got loud i could barely understand what they were saying, and from what i saw that's really the only thing i can think of, art animation and voice acting is generally improved over time, so just try and balance the volume a bit more and it would be better
... I liked it
.... I can totally understand the problems with voice acting, but I think it was a good short 'toon, animation wasn't too shabby and it was kinda fun to watch, 5/5 9/10
In short, I really liked it.
From your author comments, you made your movei sound not all that great. Thank goodness you're overly modest.
Animation: Very smooth. When I first saw your loading screen, I was reminded of many other flashes that have bubbly cartoony characters, and I assumed you'd have limited animation. I was pleasently surprised when I saw how clean and transitional the animation was. The fight scene was very well paced, and the expressions on the characters were cute.
Sound: You're voice acting was great. Stop being modest. I especially liked the serious message conveyed by your characters, and how contrasting your dialog was. It seemed like you were going for a badass yet childishly eager feeling, which somehow worked, and I really enjoyed it. Nice choice of sound effects and music, each were suited for their respective scenes.
Concept: I really wished you had made this a little bit longer. I liked the idea of two heroes goofing around while beating the crap out of people, but I felt like the wizard died too early (yes, I realize that's the joke) and I thought you could have made a castle infiltration scene, where they try to be stealthy, but blow their cover and then transition to the fight scene,
Overall: A great little movie, I like your style and I hope you make more movies for this story.
Thank you very much, but the reason I was being so modest was because my previous videos got very negative feedback in areas like the voice-acting, so I thought everyone was gonna hate it. I'm very, very glad you liked it!