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the dark one episode 3

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you have to use spacebar as the play button, hope you enjoy. sorry that the ending is so long, it was inspired by the sailor moon r movie, hope you all enjoy the film, please let me know what's wrong with part 2

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Lame

This is horrible

It needs some work... I'd like to see it improve.

It was good, but the dialogue boxes need to be the same size. Maybe a quick transition would be of help. It's almost like a slideshow in the beginning... I think the story was fine, but the dialogue needs to be spaced out. Line 1 and Line 2, so to speak. If you add some more actual animation and movement, this would earn my 4.

Also, when you scale images try to use the "Scale" button and THEN drag the corners.

Punisher33 responds:

Thank you for your comments. i do try. my later stuff is much better.

Buggy.

First, it works fine up until Serena transforms, then the background music runs together which sounds really bad. After that, it doesn't pause for the text anymore until after the song is over. I assume, you're trying to keep the animation in sync with the song which means not pausing it for a text box. Well, that doesn't do much good if no one can read the text. Try leaving the text on the screen for a few seconds and then advancing it. I think you need to pull both episodes 2 & 3 down and give them an overhaul. Let me know if you need help.

Punisher33 responds:

sure, thank you, i do need help with it. and it's driving me crazy, i'm actually having v-cam issues. it's pissing me off to no end.

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Score
3.20 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 11, 2011
8:35 AM EST
Genre
Action