make more but that water slide isn't for fat people go on a diet dinosaur thing lol
Sheesh. What a horrible way to die.... Chocking on a water slide because your too fat to fit through it...
And so it begins
Hi Pennaz! Welcome to New Grounds. Taking into consideration the fact that this is your first cartoon, I give it an 8. I give it an 8 because the animation was smooth, fluid and not Jittery and mechanical like alot of stuff uploaded by beginners (Nothing wrong with that of course) The design of the characters, sound and story were also pretty good. My one criticism is that nothing is going on in the background, perhaps add a sun, clouds or maybe the park down below.
I enjoyed it, I hope this helps.
Awsome Dragon Kick!
*high fives* =D
*looks down* oh wait, wasent there post to be a fat guy down there?
*shugs* all well My Turn =D
you say this is an experiment and your first flash so im taking that into account: the animation was pretty fluid, it had good humor, and the characters are well drawn :3 i hope to see a sequl (yellow guy should live) and you should keep up the good work with your cartoons, hopefully you'll get pretty far on this site since you seem to have good talent