artwork and music fits so well together. the sweet taste of the madness creeping inside of us all delivered a abit of art is just what we need to be aware of what happends if we let our minds slip. keep up the good work!
I'll have to check out previous chapters. LOVE the illustrations!
Been following the comic series as well since the beginning. And i must say i enjoyed it very much. Keep it up!
I've been following this comic from the beginning, and am still thoroughly enjoying the work you are producing. This episode seemed a little shorter than the others which was disappointing, but it was still very enjoyable, and revealed more about the character and perhaps where this story is going. The music, as per usual, was excellent, and your art style is superb. This comic creates an atmosphere that is wholly unique, and invokes feelings i don't find anywhere else on the web. Superb use of the english language throughout, and i don't understand people complaints about trouble reading. With full-screen on everything is legible, and clicking next page IS intuitive and simple. All in all this was another great episode, and i thank you for creating it. Looking forward to the next one!
Needs beta testing.
Your pacing was off, and the format of the comic was terrible. It took me perhaps ten minutes to work out how to do anything in the comic. It should be intuitive. By having a visible move forward button.
Likewise, the extremely slow moving forward of mostly identical moving scenes is pretty weak.
The story could do well with voice acting too. It would add a lot of gravitas.
The story and graphics are pretty ok. You should keep that the same.